Comments on: Wounds http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/05/28/wounds/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Thu, 16 Feb 2012 02:31:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/05/28/wounds/#comment-89 Fri, 30 May 2008 12:36:41 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=118#comment-89 One More Believer:

Thanks for the visit and the comment. Of course with freedom…comes a whole other set of challenges and issues. But I still prefer it to what I went through.

-Nicole

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/05/28/wounds/#comment-88 Fri, 30 May 2008 12:34:47 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=118#comment-88 Hi WhyPaisley:

Done. I updated the blogroll. Thanks for letting me know.

-Nicole

]]> By: whypaisley http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/05/28/wounds/#comment-87 Fri, 30 May 2008 12:28:51 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=118#comment-87 i had to change my domain name to whypaisley.com please change your links and or feed as necessary

all you will have to do is remove the – from between why and paisley,, everything else will remain the same and will redirect you to the correct page…. sorry for the inconvenience…

]]> By: one more believer http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/05/28/wounds/#comment-86 Thu, 29 May 2008 20:35:49 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=118#comment-86 oh that magic number 18… when freedom’s wings open… it is a beautiful moment that passes… how precious is that healing… beautiful…

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/05/28/wounds/#comment-85 Thu, 29 May 2008 17:34:36 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=118#comment-85 Hello Lirone:

Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment. Honestly, when I looked at the way the words were streamed together on PWB, the rest started to kind of fall out of the sky.

Welcome. Please feel free to stop by again.

-Nicole

]]> By: lirone http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/05/28/wounds/#comment-84 Thu, 29 May 2008 17:14:10 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=118#comment-84 I like the way you weave the 10 words seamlessly into the poem – and the ending is brilliant!

I think finding a way to express the anger positively through some sort of creative expression, rather than through more destructive channels, is a vital part of the path that leads to a full-hearted forgiveness. Not that I’ve been through anything as intense as what you’re describing here, but I think it’s generally so much more positive.

Good to see you join PWB – look forward to reading more of your poems!

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/05/28/wounds/#comment-83 Thu, 29 May 2008 15:22:08 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=118#comment-83 Thank you, and thank you for stopping by. I think we go through stages from initial hurt, to anger (which was where this was written from) to realization to forgiveness.

Please feel free to come again soon.

-Nicole

]]> By: paisley http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/05/28/wounds/#comment-82 Thu, 29 May 2008 14:57:56 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=118#comment-82 you and i wrote about the same thing,, but from two very different viewpoints in time.. wow.. this was really good,, and i get the feeling it was indeed the forbearer to my poem….

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/05/28/wounds/#comment-81 Thu, 29 May 2008 12:33:21 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=118#comment-81 No problem. And thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment. I’m glad you liked “Wounds”.

-Nicole

]]> By: Sara http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/05/28/wounds/#comment-78 Thu, 29 May 2008 06:21:19 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=118#comment-78 And I still remember how I used to flutter inside
When I saw your hand raised, reared back, and
Ready to hit me again.

That part was so intense. I felt my heart clutch reading that.

Thanks for taking part in our project at PWB.

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