Excalibur

This is a poem written off of another prompt on Scott Woods’ journal. Today’s prompt: write a poem that is a letter to an old teacher. Enjoy.

-Nicole

Dear Mr. Kinney: thank you for giving
me Excalibur – the knowledge of great words
and how to use them. You showed the living
soul of advanced vocabulary heard

never before by sixth grade ears: words such
as “potentate”. You called them “college words”
and gave a weekly list to study, much
to the chagrin of some – but I loved words

with power and meaning. They were weapons
of mass creation, language swords which spurred
me to arrange them in poetic configurations
and proper prose. So what if I’m a nerd:

For I wield a vocabulary sword.
Thank you, teacher, for an ageless reward.

Written 6/10/08
© 2008 Nicole Nicholson. All Rights Reserved.

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I am a 38 year old writer from Columbus, OH and the creator of Raven's Wing Poetry. I am a poet, seeker, fellow traveler, and autistic.
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2 Responses to Excalibur

  1. MysticWino says:

    Nice use of the sonnet! Very nice. My thanks and a salute to Mr. Kinney as well. Teachers are heroes in their own rights – especially those who have a true calling for it.
    I thought the metaphor quite fresh and charming – no – ENCHANTING. This poem gave me immense joy (and I’m cranky as a starved rat this morning!).
    David

  2. Wow! Coming from you, this compliment means a lot. I had backed off from sonnets, but decided to be brave enough to try the form.

    Thanks for stopping by.

    -Nicole

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