Comments on: Sleep http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/15/sleep/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Thu, 16 Feb 2012 02:31:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/15/sleep/#comment-238 Thu, 19 Jun 2008 15:24:44 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=161#comment-238 Oh yeah, and just when you think you’ve got all of your stuff together, too. I *know* how that is.

-Nicole

]]> By: Linda - Nickers and Ink http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/15/sleep/#comment-237 Thu, 19 Jun 2008 13:59:34 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=161#comment-237 “unfailingly fall”

Ooh . . . I can feel that sometimes.

Blessings,
L

CROSSROADS, on NICKERS AND INK

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/15/sleep/#comment-227 Wed, 18 Jun 2008 12:58:52 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=161#comment-227 Thank you, gautami.

-Nicole

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/15/sleep/#comment-224 Wed, 18 Jun 2008 03:02:25 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=161#comment-224 Chained lunes. I like the oncept. Very beautiul..

sleeping dreams

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/15/sleep/#comment-220 Tue, 17 Jun 2008 12:59:29 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=161#comment-220 Thank you, Jade.

I’ve just started experimenting with shorter forms like lunes and hay(na)ku – I find that chained, they can effectively tell a story or convey an idea without an excess of words.

-Nicole

]]> By: Jade http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/15/sleep/#comment-210 Tue, 17 Jun 2008 02:44:28 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=161#comment-210 a beauty, chained lune — i have to learn this form.
a ethereal quality in your poem that is enchanting.

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/15/sleep/#comment-201 Mon, 16 Jun 2008 19:47:46 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=161#comment-201 Thank you for your compliments. I am honored.

-Nicole

]]> By: Michelle Johnson http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/15/sleep/#comment-200 Mon, 16 Jun 2008 19:15:24 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=161#comment-200 Beautifully written. Your words take us on a journey from a born Virgin to a fall into sin. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem. Have a nice day.

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/15/sleep/#comment-194 Mon, 16 Jun 2008 13:21:36 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=161#comment-194 Thank you everyone for your comments. My first thought when I saw Monday Mural was of Our Lady of Guadalupe. I am not Catholic, but I work in a Catholic seminary, and I am learning more about Marian devotion. I guess we all need a mother, someone who gives unconditional acceptance. But I wonder – who took care of Mary?

Just some random thoughts.

Thank you all for visiting.

-Nicole

]]> By: lissa http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/15/sleep/#comment-191 Mon, 16 Jun 2008 01:46:26 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=161#comment-191 feels like a prayer of some sort and yet in doesn’t end that way, perfect match for the image

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