Comments on: You Want This http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/26/you-want-this/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Tue, 14 Feb 2012 02:37:19 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/26/you-want-this/#comment-423 Thu, 03 Jul 2008 13:02:19 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=189#comment-423 Thank you, piece of pie. :)

-Nicole

]]> By: pieceofpie http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/26/you-want-this/#comment-413 Wed, 02 Jul 2008 16:05:19 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=189#comment-413 i gotta feelin the doctor is in a pickle of sorts… but loved how you set the scene… with whispers, hidden dark corners, the nurse as a caretaker…

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/26/you-want-this/#comment-369 Sun, 29 Jun 2008 17:01:41 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=189#comment-369 Thank you, tumblewords! I used a family story for inspiration on this one.

-Nicole

]]> By: Tumblewords http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/26/you-want-this/#comment-361 Sat, 28 Jun 2008 01:25:34 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=189#comment-361 Full of passion, promise and hidden agenda! Nice work!

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/26/you-want-this/#comment-350 Fri, 27 Jun 2008 13:47:12 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=189#comment-350 Hello all:

Thank you for dropping by and leaving your compliments and honest assessments. Friday Five always presents a challenge to me because of the variety of words that are picked – but I am not one to shrink from a challenge.

Keep looking for more Friday Five poetry!

-Nicole

]]> By: Michelle Johnson http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/26/you-want-this/#comment-348 Fri, 27 Jun 2008 10:43:22 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=189#comment-348 doctor, doctor give me the news! i’ve got a bad case of lovin’ you! nice job. have a nice day.

]]> By: watermaid http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/26/you-want-this/#comment-347 Fri, 27 Jun 2008 08:51:03 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=189#comment-347 I like the tongue-in cheek humour of this -’you can’t deny your desire / doctor’.

]]> By: Ayesha http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/26/you-want-this/#comment-344 Fri, 27 Jun 2008 05:19:19 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=189#comment-344 You know, I did like this poem- the voice is very strong and passionate, the atmosphere you create is very real, however I felt that somewhere you were explaining too much… with the word doctor onwards, it sounded very forced…
Hope this helps!
Cheers
Ayesha.

]]> By: lissa http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/26/you-want-this/#comment-340 Thu, 26 Jun 2008 21:24:27 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=189#comment-340 i love the strong, passionate voice.

]]> By: Julie Buffaloe-Yoder http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/26/you-want-this/#comment-339 Thu, 26 Jun 2008 19:43:55 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=189#comment-339 Wow. This is so strong. Excellent work, Nicole! I found your site via poets who blog. Thank you for sharing!

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