Comments on: He Sits in the Garden http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/03/he-sits-in-the-garden/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Wed, 23 May 2012 23:56:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/03/he-sits-in-the-garden/#comment-479 Wed, 09 Jul 2008 14:16:07 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=214#comment-479 Thank you, piece of pie.

-Nicole

]]> By: pieceofpie http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/03/he-sits-in-the-garden/#comment-462 Mon, 07 Jul 2008 17:08:10 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=214#comment-462 excellent form raven..

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/03/he-sits-in-the-garden/#comment-440 Sun, 06 Jul 2008 17:11:29 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=214#comment-440 Thank you, everybody!

-Nicole

]]> By: nathan1313 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/03/he-sits-in-the-garden/#comment-439 Sun, 06 Jul 2008 14:02:44 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=214#comment-439 I like the turn at the end and throughout a real sense of the subject’s emotion. Another tough form done well.

]]> By: Cynthia http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/03/he-sits-in-the-garden/#comment-437 Sat, 05 Jul 2008 16:25:51 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=214#comment-437 oh, i like the contemplative nature of this cinquain.

]]> By: Pam http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/03/he-sits-in-the-garden/#comment-434 Fri, 04 Jul 2008 12:29:28 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=214#comment-434 I agree with Lirone, you did a masterful job of building up the image until the focus was clear.

]]> By: Scot http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/03/he-sits-in-the-garden/#comment-433 Fri, 04 Jul 2008 12:07:36 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=214#comment-433 this rings true for many–I remember a friend in school whose mother insisted he be a priest

]]> By: lirone http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/03/he-sits-in-the-garden/#comment-431 Thu, 03 Jul 2008 21:43:30 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=214#comment-431 Fun… I love how you build up the image, verse by verse, so we get a clearer and clearer idea of what is happening!

]]> By: paisley http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/03/he-sits-in-the-garden/#comment-429 Thu, 03 Jul 2008 19:51:01 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=214#comment-429 parents.. how could they ever wish celibacy on their offspring… i will never understand…

this was a fun,, if nervous,, poem….

]]> By: Michelle Johnson http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/03/he-sits-in-the-garden/#comment-428 Thu, 03 Jul 2008 18:35:37 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=214#comment-428 I truly enjoyed your poem. I think everyone should have the opportunity to live life the way it makes them happiest. Life’s to short to be lived any other way. Nice job. Have a nice day.

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