I wrote this hay(na)ku chain for the Monday Mural prompt from Poefusion. This week’s mural is pictured above. Enjoy.
-Nicole
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hair
pinned up
reveals blank skin
smooth
angles and
rounded flesh corners
my
lips want
to travel and
navigate
her neck
in slow motion
I
want to
smell sweet pheromones
unlocked
by my
tender massaging fingers
I
want to
emancipate her hair
deliver
it from
hair clip bondage
and
let it
flow in rivers
of
black down
her brown neck
I
want her
to be real
and
not sealed
in sketch paper
Written 7/6/08
© 2008 Nicole Nicholson. All Rights Reserved
Your poem reminds me of the song Take On Me by Aha. I really liked the video because the sketch came to life just like you are wishing for here. Nice job. Keep up the good work. Have a nice day.
I loved this journey, Nicole, a clean, sexy ride.
Me too damn it.
oh i like this one,, the little twistr in the ned,, where we find out she is just a scetch,, very nice…
i just woke up… can ya tell??? LOL!!!!
Thank you, all, for your compliments. I thought I’d take a walk on the sensual side with this one. Of course, the sketch definitely lends itself to this.
-Nicole
Very lovely sensual journey… particularly the sweet pheromones!
Thank you, lirone.
-Nicole
yes, it is beautiful… and the form, well the form lends such a subtlety… sigh…