Comments on: Light http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/06/light/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Thu, 16 Feb 2012 02:31:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/06/light/#comment-471 Wed, 09 Jul 2008 12:57:21 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=215#comment-471 Thank you all for your compliments, everyone. I’ve only half been here, but I have been reading your comments. Seeing them helps me to remember why I am writing and to not give up. Thank you for visiting. :)

-Nicole

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/06/light/#comment-470 Tue, 08 Jul 2008 13:36:12 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=215#comment-470 Liked this.

piece of charcoal split into splinters

]]> By: pieceofpie http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/06/light/#comment-464 Mon, 07 Jul 2008 21:30:13 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=215#comment-464 yeah, what they all sed… joseph was one of those special ones who never gave up faith.. this form is magic raven…

]]> By: nathan1313 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/06/light/#comment-463 Mon, 07 Jul 2008 17:59:23 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=215#comment-463 “hair thin stream of light” — a wonderful image.

]]> By: Crafty Green Poet http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/06/light/#comment-461 Mon, 07 Jul 2008 16:53:00 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=215#comment-461 nice use of the form.

]]> By: christine http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/06/light/#comment-460 Mon, 07 Jul 2008 15:10:04 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=215#comment-460 Even though this is a story of Joseph,you were able to show the universal nature of waiting how humans wait in the dark, with our hopes pinned on that single strand of light. Delicate verse!

]]> By: twitches http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/06/light/#comment-458 Mon, 07 Jul 2008 13:14:19 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=215#comment-458 An interesting experiment. I think it works – I especially like

piercing the darkness
of this pit
where I
wait

]]> By: paisley http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/06/light/#comment-457 Mon, 07 Jul 2008 11:54:14 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=215#comment-457 nice form,, and sad content… if punishment was lack of light,, most of us would live in darkness…..

]]> By: Noah http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/06/light/#comment-449 Sun, 06 Jul 2008 22:53:48 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=215#comment-449 Powerful!

]]> By: lissa http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/06/light/#comment-443 Sun, 06 Jul 2008 19:31:08 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=215#comment-443 love the structure. those last two stanzas especially grab me.

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