Comments on: What I Would Tell His Family http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/11/what-i-would-tell-his-family/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Tue, 14 Feb 2012 02:37:19 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/11/what-i-would-tell-his-family/#comment-555 Mon, 14 Jul 2008 13:13:07 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=234#comment-555 Thanks, everyone.

-Nicole

]]> By: Sweet Talking Guy.. http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/11/what-i-would-tell-his-family/#comment-536 Sat, 12 Jul 2008 00:50:31 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=234#comment-536 Wow! the haynaku just get better and better – forward and reverse, chains etc. whatever next?
You
cut him
with machete words
dull and rusted
he still
bleeds
Phew!

]]> By: rebecca http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/11/what-i-would-tell-his-family/#comment-535 Fri, 11 Jul 2008 23:40:58 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=234#comment-535 bleedingly raw….and perfectly said.

]]> By: Linda Jacobs http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/11/what-i-would-tell-his-family/#comment-533 Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:40:33 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=234#comment-533 Man oh man! That is some poem! Love the machete words and the “half tones”!

]]> By: lirone http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/11/what-i-would-tell-his-family/#comment-531 Fri, 11 Jul 2008 17:09:03 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=234#comment-531 I’m with Brian on this one… wow! This form is really effective, and it tells a powerful story.

]]> By: Brian http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/07/11/what-i-would-tell-his-family/#comment-529 Fri, 11 Jul 2008 16:43:07 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=234#comment-529 (((((hugs)))))

Wow!

I feel such emotion flowing from this page.

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