Secret Crush
Wednesday, July 23, 2008
This hay(na)ku chain is the second one I wrote for this week’s Three Word Wednesday prompt – to use the words “avoid”, “class” and “sticky”. I dug into my mental vault back to high school for this one. Enjoy.
-Nicole
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I’ve
avoided your
burning acid eyes
which
could lay
me completely bare
in
two looks
or less – despite
my
trembling trepidation
I cannot help
but
stare secretly
in class while
you
scribble away
and slyly pretend
not
to feel
upon your neck
my
eyes like
long distance fingers
I
wonder now
just how sticky
our
two bodies
would be if
one
day they
happened to meet
Written 7/23/08
© 2008 Nicole Nicholson. All Rights Reserved.
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ooooooh, this is delicious. Such a yummy way of thinking about sticky.
Rose
xo
this is delicious.. i have to copy rose,, even tho it was my first response, not having yet read her comment!!!!!
Really sexy and intense. I’m glad I had the chance to read this gem.
I like this secret crush and its possible sticky consequences
Yes, I remember high school, too. This is breathless and eager, totally spot on.
lovely feel & style. love the intensity of this.
Yeah, those last three stanzas really bring it together.
nicole
all of the above–loved it
Thank you, everyone….I don’t write erotic stuff that often, but occasionally that voice needs to come out for fresh air…and I don’t hesitate to let it out.
-Nicole