Lover’s E-mail Exchange

This sedoka was written for the Three Word Wednesday prompt. This week’s words: omitted, gamble, and temporary. Enjoy.

-Nicole
—————————————–
long distance gambles
Eros lives in our e-mails
hearts lift on temporary highs

after we have met
we discover that both have
omitted critical truths

Written 7/30/08
© 2008 Nicole Nicholson. All Rights Reserved.

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About ravenswingpoetry

I am a 35 year old writer from Columbus, OH and the creator of Raven's Wing Poetry. I am a poet, seeker, fellow traveler, and Aspie.

8 thoughts on “Lover’s E-mail Exchange

  1. pia says:

    That is too true and too funny. Me like

  2. TC says:

    I think this happens frequently, but that doesn’t make it any less disappointing at the time.

  3. Joyce T. says:

    Wow! What a great use of the 3WW prompt! Quite contemporary, too.

  4. paisley says:

    but i bet it was fun while it lasted……

  5. Tumblewords says:

    Ah, dreams are oftentimes better than the real thing. Great post!

  6. Very aptly put. I suppose we can all relate to this feeling!

    Creativity

  7. nathan1313 says:

    “Eros lives in our emails” — wonderful.

  8. pieceofpie says:

    who woulda knew that life could be so complicated… this is so funny but yet so sad… getting to know people thru the net is interesting to say the least…

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