Comments on: At The Beach http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/03/at-the-beach/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Thu, 16 Feb 2012 02:31:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/03/at-the-beach/#comment-913 Sun, 17 Aug 2008 20:02:41 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=350#comment-913 I have not forgotten everyone, I have been reading your comments, I have just been really busy….thank you for dropping by and leaving your thoughts.

-Nicole

]]> By: twitches http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/03/at-the-beach/#comment-854 Wed, 06 Aug 2008 21:13:40 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=350#comment-854 Amazing how many erotic poems there are this week…this is one of the best. The form suits the subject so well.

]]> By: Habibi http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/03/at-the-beach/#comment-849 Tue, 05 Aug 2008 22:59:09 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=350#comment-849 Really evocative – I was there!

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/03/at-the-beach/#comment-847 Tue, 05 Aug 2008 12:49:05 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=350#comment-847 Thank you, everyone. This reminds me, we, um, need to go to the beach this summer….*grin*

-Nicole

]]> By: A~Lotus http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/03/at-the-beach/#comment-840 Tue, 05 Aug 2008 02:53:59 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=350#comment-840 I love the way you combine all of the erotic smells of summer in short lines.

The short lines make it a quick read, which shows how the nose can smell so many things at once! :)

]]> By: durable pigments http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/03/at-the-beach/#comment-835 Mon, 04 Aug 2008 23:32:48 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=350#comment-835 Wow… very erotic! Great concept–and vivid imagery.

]]> By: Crafty Green Poet http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/03/at-the-beach/#comment-833 Mon, 04 Aug 2008 17:51:31 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=350#comment-833 excellent

]]> By: nathan1313 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/03/at-the-beach/#comment-832 Mon, 04 Aug 2008 15:21:50 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=350#comment-832 Eros is the first thing I think of in terms of the topic of smell. This is so intense, of course the shore is a perfect setting for this prompt. A pleasure to read.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/03/at-the-beach/#comment-831 Mon, 04 Aug 2008 15:14:25 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=350#comment-831 That last stanza is too good!

yellowed piece of paper

]]> By: anthonynorth http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/03/at-the-beach/#comment-830 Mon, 04 Aug 2008 14:49:20 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=350#comment-830 Some erotic smells there :-)

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