Comments on: Subway http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/10/subway/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Thu, 16 Feb 2012 02:31:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Annamari http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/10/subway/#comment-1002 Thu, 28 Aug 2008 01:58:39 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=388#comment-1002 I love”Metropolis, the whore/decked out in/the finest concrete and neon
she glows, electric”-great image of the big city (metropolis).

]]> By: lissa http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/10/subway/#comment-1001 Thu, 28 Aug 2008 01:15:19 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=388#comment-1001 very much describing New York and pretty much any city subways, and you fill in the sometimes oddness when visiting the subway, especially strange in the am hour, plus I really like your character descriptions

I use your poem for Read Write Poem exercise, now reading your version, I almost think, I may also be writing about the subway but I really wasn’t aiming for anything in particular

]]> By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/10/subway/#comment-921 Sun, 17 Aug 2008 20:46:16 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=388#comment-921 I have not forgotten everyone, I have been reading your comments, I have just been really busy….thank you for dropping by and leaving your thoughts.

I have ridden the subways in DC, which are not actually that bad, depending on what time of day you ride.

I was imagining NYC when I wrote this.

Your comments are appreciated and welcomed, as always.

-Nicole

]]> By: Brad http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/10/subway/#comment-907 Fri, 15 Aug 2008 09:11:04 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=388#comment-907 Very evocotive. I love it.

]]> By: pieceofpie http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/10/subway/#comment-895 Tue, 12 Aug 2008 00:14:36 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=388#comment-895 a most interesting view of subterranean humanity in the midnight hours…

]]> By: Sandy http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/10/subway/#comment-890 Mon, 11 Aug 2008 20:48:06 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=388#comment-890 Such a good, graphic picture of the whole scene. I like the way you lead us there down the subway steps.

]]> By: Tumblewords http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/10/subway/#comment-887 Mon, 11 Aug 2008 18:03:08 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=388#comment-887 Well done! It’s applicable to many parts of life as well as the city at dark.

]]> By: teric http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/10/subway/#comment-886 Mon, 11 Aug 2008 17:08:57 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=388#comment-886 wonderful visual words and images! And oh so true.

]]> By: Fledgling Poet http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/10/subway/#comment-884 Mon, 11 Aug 2008 02:36:06 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=388#comment-884 This is so visual…I love it! I’ve never lived in the city, so it sounds exciting yet a bit scary at the same time. I’d love to experience it myself one day!

]]> By: qualcosa di bello http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/10/subway/#comment-883 Mon, 11 Aug 2008 02:26:33 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=388#comment-883 that is quite a jolt for my country girl senses…i’ve never been in the subway at night

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