Comments on: Sunday Morning in Five Parts http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/17/sunday-morning-in-five-parts/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Wed, 23 May 2012 23:56:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/17/sunday-morning-in-five-parts/#comment-1008 Thu, 28 Aug 2008 18:11:13 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=436#comment-1008 Thank you, everyone…the prompt challenged me to think and observe in the here and now, and I’m glad I let myself be challenged. I’m glad you all liked this.

-Nicole

]]> By: Crafty Green Poet http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/17/sunday-morning-in-five-parts/#comment-946 Tue, 19 Aug 2008 07:08:41 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=436#comment-946 you’ve focussed on sounds really well in this poem

]]> By: durable pigments http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/17/sunday-morning-in-five-parts/#comment-943 Mon, 18 Aug 2008 23:38:26 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=436#comment-943 Such a beautiful way to capture these moments–nicely executed.

I particularly love these lines…

“open, whispering
the language of turned pages”

]]> By: Linda Jacobs http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/17/sunday-morning-in-five-parts/#comment-939 Mon, 18 Aug 2008 18:11:20 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=436#comment-939 Such peacefulness here! Love them all!

]]> By: C.Elizabeth http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/17/sunday-morning-in-five-parts/#comment-938 Mon, 18 Aug 2008 17:59:00 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=436#comment-938 This was great. I loved IV: cicadas as morracas to signal the heat.
Beautiful!

C

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/17/sunday-morning-in-five-parts/#comment-937 Mon, 18 Aug 2008 16:14:49 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=436#comment-937 I liked the second one very much. All are great!

plunging in the tunneled abyss

]]> By: nathan1313 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/17/sunday-morning-in-five-parts/#comment-936 Mon, 18 Aug 2008 15:09:23 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=436#comment-936 I like the way you take the five details and use them to open up a whole scene. Good work

]]> By: Annamari http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/17/sunday-morning-in-five-parts/#comment-935 Mon, 18 Aug 2008 14:59:48 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=436#comment-935 You made it seem so easy.
It was a delight to read them…

]]> By: anthonynorth http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/17/sunday-morning-in-five-parts/#comment-934 Mon, 18 Aug 2008 14:30:26 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=436#comment-934 Some lovely images of how life should always be.

]]> By: christine http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/08/17/sunday-morning-in-five-parts/#comment-932 Mon, 18 Aug 2008 13:01:15 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=436#comment-932 You describe a peaceful Sunday, full of quiet enjoyment.

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