Comments on: Beach Rendezvous in Six Sentences http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/06/beach-rendezvous-in-six-sentences/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Wed, 23 May 2012 23:56:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: ravenswingpoetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/06/beach-rendezvous-in-six-sentences/#comment-1105 Mon, 15 Sep 2008 20:38:26 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=550#comment-1105 Thanks, everyone.

No voyeur poem I think is complete without the narrator turning the lens on his or herself.

This made me a little…erm….hot writing this. And I enjoyed the challenge that I was faced with in this prompt.

-Nicole

]]> By: polkadotwitch http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/06/beach-rendezvous-in-six-sentences/#comment-1079 Tue, 09 Sep 2008 13:51:22 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=550#comment-1079 i think it’s wonderful that the narrator is brave enough in the end to comment just how hot being a voyeur makes him/her. :)

]]> By: susan http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/06/beach-rendezvous-in-six-sentences/#comment-1077 Tue, 09 Sep 2008 01:08:27 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=550#comment-1077 Hot. Just curious though, how are arms chiseled and sot. Smooth? Quite nasty. Got a beach towel? lol

]]> By: kimberlee http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/06/beach-rendezvous-in-six-sentences/#comment-1075 Mon, 08 Sep 2008 16:59:20 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=550#comment-1075 Wow. Steamy stuff. :)

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/06/beach-rendezvous-in-six-sentences/#comment-1074 Mon, 08 Sep 2008 15:49:13 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=550#comment-1074 Some great phrases. Sensual, I all this…

what does one call it?

]]> By: lirone http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/06/beach-rendezvous-in-six-sentences/#comment-1073 Mon, 08 Sep 2008 15:44:05 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=550#comment-1073 I like the “singular darkness” idea… links beautifully back to the “queen of his night” phrase earlier.

]]> By: anthonynorth http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/06/beach-rendezvous-in-six-sentences/#comment-1072 Mon, 08 Sep 2008 14:50:28 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=550#comment-1072 Excellently done. And I agree – hot!

]]> By: nathan1313 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/06/beach-rendezvous-in-six-sentences/#comment-1071 Mon, 08 Sep 2008 12:56:40 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=550#comment-1071 I like the way the narrator turns back to themselves at the end. The whole thing is great.

]]> By: paisley http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/06/beach-rendezvous-in-six-sentences/#comment-1065 Sun, 07 Sep 2008 12:20:37 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=550#comment-1065 perfectly executed,, and oh so hot…

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