Comments on: Dreams http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/21/dreams/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Wed, 23 May 2012 23:56:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: November’s Poetry Super Highway Live Show is Online! « Raven’s Wing Poetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/21/dreams/#comment-1326 Sun, 09 Nov 2008 23:47:07 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=619#comment-1326 [...] November’s Poetry Super Highway Live Show, which broadcast today, is online now! I read “Dreams” on today’s broadcast. You can listen by [...]

]]> By: nathan1313 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/21/dreams/#comment-1147 Fri, 26 Sep 2008 16:16:44 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=619#comment-1147 Great contrast between the “shiny palace of temporary exile” and reality. And I like where you take it at the end, drawing in the audience.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/21/dreams/#comment-1146 Fri, 26 Sep 2008 15:01:01 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=619#comment-1146 Great word play.. Some really wonderful lines in there!

Someday

]]> By: Christine http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/21/dreams/#comment-1142 Thu, 25 Sep 2008 20:49:32 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=619#comment-1142 You capture the dream world so well. Many stand out lines. I particularly liked these:

gossamer thread in a windstorm.
It disappears in an instant,
the moment we break above water
and smell the surface of reality

]]> By: susan http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/21/dreams/#comment-1141 Thu, 25 Sep 2008 18:57:02 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=619#comment-1141 You completely caught me up in the images and emotion.

]]> By: Michelle Johnson http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/21/dreams/#comment-1140 Thu, 25 Sep 2008 18:27:54 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=619#comment-1140 Raven, this is gritty and brittle as Sweet Talking Guy said and so much more. This is so human and in depth I cannot express how much I liked this poem. It’s incredible. Have a nice day.

]]> By: Sweet Talking Guy.. http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/09/21/dreams/#comment-1139 Thu, 25 Sep 2008 13:24:52 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=619#comment-1139 I love the idea of butterfly wing dreams, I’m rubbing my eyes right now. This was gritty and brittle at the same time.

Nice work!

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