Comments on: Hallelujah

By: renkat

renkat — Sun, 05 Oct 2008 17:05:44 +0000

I love religious triptychs, how appropriate. It also reminds me of mad-libs

gautami tripathy — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 15:51:19 +0000

I liked the visual effect it creates in my mind. locked in the attic

Sweet Talking Guy.. — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 14:23:50 +0000

Hallelujah! Clever you!!
I read it backwards from the bottom right and if you read it slowly it just about makes sense.

Don’t you just love experiments?

nathan1313 — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 13:53:39 +0000

What a great experiment in form. I love “beyond concrete and neon / bursting from paradise.”

Philip Thrift — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 07:16:53 +0000

A ‘diptych’ poem is hard enough to make! This is very creative.

Crafty Green Poet — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 07:03:37 +0000

its a great structure, and works well in this poem

Christine — Thu, 02 Oct 2008 22:02:00 +0000

Nicole, your poem is beautiful! Your form is wonderful for the theme. Very creative.

Annamari — Thu, 02 Oct 2008 19:12:10 +0000

It is great. First I like how you structured it …
than dance in the womb wordless songs…great image.I’ll come back to it.