Comments on: While Waiting For A Bus http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/05/while-waiting-for-a-bus/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Wed, 23 May 2012 23:56:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: patois http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/05/while-waiting-for-a-bus/#comment-1208 Wed, 08 Oct 2008 23:49:16 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=664#comment-1208 Your sentiments are so wonderfully put. What a great poem!

]]> By: Kathiespoettree http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/05/while-waiting-for-a-bus/#comment-1205 Wed, 08 Oct 2008 19:58:14 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=664#comment-1205 What a nice surprise! You, yourself, must be open to receive such a gift!

]]> By: susan http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/05/while-waiting-for-a-bus/#comment-1201 Tue, 07 Oct 2008 01:10:38 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=664#comment-1201 “I wanted a ride”

I like what this implies.

]]> By: Tumblewords http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/05/while-waiting-for-a-bus/#comment-1198 Mon, 06 Oct 2008 18:13:59 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=664#comment-1198 Great discovery!

]]> By: Michelle Johnson http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/05/while-waiting-for-a-bus/#comment-1197 Mon, 06 Oct 2008 13:06:21 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=664#comment-1197 Raven, I love this poem. It’s beautiful and reaches out for a brief moment allowing you to find yourself. Enjoyed this immensely. Well done. Have a nice day.

]]> By: Pam http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/05/while-waiting-for-a-bus/#comment-1196 Mon, 06 Oct 2008 12:06:21 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=664#comment-1196 Very nice. I’m impressed that you were able to use both of the prompts.

]]> By: Sandy http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/05/while-waiting-for-a-bus/#comment-1195 Mon, 06 Oct 2008 11:15:50 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=664#comment-1195 Perfect! I love the last two lines.

]]> By: anthonynorth http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/05/while-waiting-for-a-bus/#comment-1194 Mon, 06 Oct 2008 07:48:28 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=664#comment-1194 Perfectly done.

]]> By: Beth Patterson http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/05/while-waiting-for-a-bus/#comment-1193 Mon, 06 Oct 2008 02:34:22 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=664#comment-1193 Just like that!

]]> By: SandyCarlsqn http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/05/while-waiting-for-a-bus/#comment-1191 Sun, 05 Oct 2008 22:02:33 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=664#comment-1191 I like that very much. What a beautiful transformation!

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