Comments on: Runaways http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/15/runaways/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Thu, 16 Feb 2012 02:31:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: nathan1313 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/15/runaways/#comment-1243 Fri, 17 Oct 2008 10:34:25 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=714#comment-1243 I love where you went with this — a tribute to the outcast. There’s so much here, from your musical language to the way you use music as a metaphor — “dissonant,” “blue notes,” –wonderful!

]]> By: Annamari http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/15/runaways/#comment-1241 Thu, 16 Oct 2008 19:42:16 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=714#comment-1241 thank you for sharing this powerful poem about America we do ignore.
I had known a runaway, it is a sad story…

]]> By: rob kistner http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/15/runaways/#comment-1240 Thu, 16 Oct 2008 18:32:12 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=714#comment-1240 biting and provocative work… well done!

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/15/runaways/#comment-1239 Thu, 16 Oct 2008 14:15:27 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=714#comment-1239 A very powerful post. You did well with the words!

your undoing

]]> By: Sweet Talking Guy.. http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/15/runaways/#comment-1238 Thu, 16 Oct 2008 13:50:05 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=714#comment-1238 I like the way you weaved the prompts together and managed to weave a message about thes tatterdemalion kids.

]]> By: Michelle Johnson http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/15/runaways/#comment-1236 Thu, 16 Oct 2008 01:02:54 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=714#comment-1236 I think you turned out a strong piece here, Raven. I liked the words I saw growing over at RWP too. I can’t wait to see what else came of this project. Well done. Have a nice night.

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