Comments on: Echolalia http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/20/echolalia/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Thu, 16 Feb 2012 02:31:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: nathan1313 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/20/echolalia/#comment-1271 Fri, 24 Oct 2008 16:06:30 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=730#comment-1271 An amazing form. I couldn’t imagine trying this. It must be so difficult. I really like the repetition of “be echolalia.”

]]> By: Annamari http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/20/echolalia/#comment-1270 Fri, 24 Oct 2008 14:01:43 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=730#comment-1270 I like the form for sure, because you can also read it from left to right and down up…it is puzzling.

]]> By: Ingrid/durable pigments http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/20/echolalia/#comment-1269 Fri, 24 Oct 2008 13:23:19 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=730#comment-1269 The repetition of “I will not become” is so effective here.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/20/echolalia/#comment-1268 Fri, 24 Oct 2008 12:42:59 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=730#comment-1268 A great visual effet. It was a treat!

http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/10/echoes-reverbate-half-poem.html

]]> By: thebirdsings http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/20/echolalia/#comment-1267 Fri, 24 Oct 2008 05:39:37 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=730#comment-1267 Well done! I’m impressed. (I can’t imagine how long that must have taken.)

]]> By: Stan Ski http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/20/echolalia/#comment-1266 Fri, 24 Oct 2008 02:52:48 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=730#comment-1266 Works really well. Whichever way you read it, the haunting message sends it repeated hammer blows.

]]> By: Sweet Talking Guy.. http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/20/echolalia/#comment-1265 Fri, 24 Oct 2008 00:22:22 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=730#comment-1265 Love the way this goes together poetically. A powerful message with a very strong refain at the end!

]]> By: Poet With a Day Job http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/20/echolalia/#comment-1264 Thu, 23 Oct 2008 18:00:47 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=730#comment-1264 This is wonderfully executed. it is so hard to do the kind of poem which reads down as well as across and you’ve done a tryptych! Great work. Really.

]]> By: poeticgrin http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/20/echolalia/#comment-1258 Tue, 21 Oct 2008 21:52:28 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=730#comment-1258 Heavy stuff – haunting and moving. The three-peat of the lines “I will not become” is especially powerful.

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