http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/21/declaration-of-the-water/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Wed, 23 May 2012 23:56:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/21/declaration-of-the-water/#comment-1263 Thu, 23 Oct 2008 13:27:10 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=733#comment-1263 Wonderfully dark poem. I really like the personification of the rain and her lack of control. The photo is amazing.

]]> http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/21/declaration-of-the-water/#comment-1260 Wed, 22 Oct 2008 04:20:23 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=733#comment-1260 I thoroughly enjoyed your take of rain as mistress of the wind. Its unfeeling relentlessness, a harbinger of doom. But oddly, its honesty in the face of this doom is somewhat comforting. Very evocative.

]]> http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/21/declaration-of-the-water/#comment-1259 Tue, 21 Oct 2008 23:12:09 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=733#comment-1259 hurricanes and their destruction, wrath are always in the back of someone’s mind living near water and its unpredictable surfaces. Well written, Raven. Have a nice night.

]]> http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/10/21/declaration-of-the-water/#comment-1256 Tue, 21 Oct 2008 17:37:09 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=733#comment-1256 nicole… insightful as to the mysterious wind… cannot help but to think of texas and louisiana… and that photo a thousand words could no less speak as loudly..

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