Comments on: Childhood in Six American Sentences

By: Pam

Pam — Sat, 29 Nov 2008 14:23:45 +0000

Great response to the prompt– full of teen-aged rebellion!

By: sue

sue — Wed, 26 Nov 2008 02:56:46 +0000

It’s really nice to get an inside look at a much younger generation’s childhood.

By: pieceofpie

pieceofpie — Wed, 26 Nov 2008 02:48:54 +0000

loved the expressive lines… jumpropes makes me think of double dutch.. black eyeliner and docs, dang…i’d but all forgotten…

By: Deborah Godin

Deborah Godin — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 20:18:31 +0000

Very much enjoyed your work, plus it’s introduced me to some new forms, too.

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 19:16:45 +0000

Nice use of American Sentences and the prompts. Memories are nifty… BTW – congratulations on being PSH poet!

By: nathan1313

nathan1313 — Fri, 21 Nov 2008 15:59:13 +0000

Ah, Doc Martins, that’s some quality footwear, seriously. I didn’t have black eyeliner but I did sport some black nail polish in my youth. Great work here.

By: Philip Thrift

Philip Thrift — Thu, 20 Nov 2008 17:42:14 +0000

I actually do like poems with allusions — that elude me. (I look them up and learn things of alien generations.) This one gives a nice aolution for X.

By: Sweet Talking Guy..

Sweet Talking Guy.. — Thu, 20 Nov 2008 15:31:42 +0000

Now you’re really talking!

By: SandyCarlson

SandyCarlson — Thu, 20 Nov 2008 00:48:42 +0000

That’s wonderful, Nicole! Thanks.

By: Scot

Scot — Wed, 19 Nov 2008 02:51:53 +0000

this is inspiring nicole–x cellent