Comments on: The Sun Has Spilled Upon His Face http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/02/15/the-sun-has-spilled-upon-his-face/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Wed, 23 May 2012 23:56:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: James http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/02/15/the-sun-has-spilled-upon-his-face/#comment-1518 Fri, 20 Feb 2009 21:11:17 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1028#comment-1518 “Country Feedback” is actually one of my favorite REM songs. I like how this poem works with the echoes of the song playing in my mind as I read it.

]]> By: Philip Thrift http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/02/15/the-sun-has-spilled-upon-his-face/#comment-1517 Fri, 20 Feb 2009 08:22:12 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1028#comment-1517 I like the way the metaphor of “film” is woven (spliced) into this.

]]> By: Sweet Talking Guy.. http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/02/15/the-sun-has-spilled-upon-his-face/#comment-1516 Fri, 20 Feb 2009 01:55:42 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1028#comment-1516 Hi Nicole, the refrain works so well here and pulls the different elements together. very well written.

The NaisaiKu.. Challenge!

]]> By: Deb http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/02/15/the-sun-has-spilled-upon-his-face/#comment-1515 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 23:44:06 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1028#comment-1515 The repeating line of sun on his face keeps the hope of the poem lifted, moves it forward.

]]> By: Crafty Green Poet http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/02/15/the-sun-has-spilled-upon-his-face/#comment-1513 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 07:57:22 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1028#comment-1513 very sad, remember to put a link in the Get Your Poem on post at read Write Poem too, that’s up today.

]]> By: Shadow of Iris » Blog Archive » Poems & stuff, last edition for now! http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/02/15/the-sun-has-spilled-upon-his-face/#comment-1510 Mon, 16 Feb 2009 04:13:40 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1028#comment-1510 [...] The Sun Has Spilled Upon His Face by Nicole Nicholson at Raven’s Wing Poetry; neat. [...]

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