Comments on: Asphalt http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/05/13/asphalt/ The Poetry of Nicole Nicholson Wed, 23 May 2012 23:56:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: The Egyptian « Raven’s Wing Poetry http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/05/13/asphalt/#comment-1870 Tue, 09 Jun 2009 20:22:02 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1180#comment-1870 [...] as a pop-up window, depending on your browser. One can understand the poem without them, but after my first experiment with hyperlinked poetry, it seemed that this one begged for [...]

]]> By: James http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/05/13/asphalt/#comment-1765 Wed, 20 May 2009 18:53:18 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1180#comment-1765 This is a really amazing piece. So vivid. I love the hyperlinks and the way your site pulls up the links when you mouse over rather than having to click away.

]]> By: Annamari http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/05/13/asphalt/#comment-1745 Fri, 15 May 2009 00:32:20 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1180#comment-1745 Great connection between images and words. “pace asphalt, walk concrete, stomp stones” ….

]]> By: Andy Sewina http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/05/13/asphalt/#comment-1744 Thu, 14 May 2009 23:44:59 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1180#comment-1744 I found the poem quite difficult to read, but I think you made good use of the links and the one about the Mingo people, I found very interesting.

]]> By: wayne http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/05/13/asphalt/#comment-1743 Thu, 14 May 2009 22:45:12 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1180#comment-1743 I had to read this again…even better second time around

]]> By: Laura Valentine http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/05/13/asphalt/#comment-1741 Thu, 14 May 2009 14:39:51 +0000 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/?p=1180#comment-1741 “Death cleansing the path for Life’s footsteps…”

Such brilliant phrasing, such evocative imagery. Thank you for this gift of words.

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