Comments on: Forget/Remember

By: nathan

nathan — Mon, 08 Jun 2009 02:01:38 +0000

This form is amazing. “Being imprinted with someone else’s stars” is a fantastic line.

angie — Sat, 06 Jun 2009 00:56:46 +0000

I love this “cleave” poem! You do it so well!

and it’s amazing how different it is, depending on which way you read it. This would be a great RWP prompt!! (hint, hint…)

gautami tripathy — Fri, 05 Jun 2009 13:53:08 +0000

Annamari — Fri, 05 Jun 2009 00:08:36 +0000

I really enjoy when you write these poems- one can read them as a whole or as two separate poems and they are still amazing…

sarah — Thu, 04 Jun 2009 03:34:49 +0000

Oh wow!!

Jessica GC — Thu, 04 Jun 2009 01:20:04 +0000

So honest and vulnerable and brave. I really enjoyed reading this piece.

Michelle Johnson — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 01:27:47 +0000

Almost forgot… I love how this reads as two separate poems or as one. Keep up the good work.

Michelle Johnson — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 01:26:49 +0000

Powerful write. I think everyone is irreplaceable. If only everyone could look deeper into themselves to see this as you have. Well done.