Comments on: The Egyptian

By: Deb

Deb — Fri, 12 Jun 2009 00:10:28 +0000

Fascinating, you’ve got an epic covered!

By: Laura

Laura — Thu, 11 Jun 2009 17:43:13 +0000

I will read and re-read this often. So many parallels, so little that truly separates us.

By: Katie

Katie — Thu, 11 Jun 2009 15:11:17 +0000

wow…I read it once and then read it again and once more, that whole thing is worth a 5th and 6th read. It is just so beautiful. I especially loved this:

behind a sarcophagus
endless origami
black tissue folding, moving, flying

Thank you so much for sharing!

By: angie

angie — Thu, 11 Jun 2009 14:05:14 +0000

Oh, that was a great read! I love this whole concept–although I am a bit partial to “Una…” and her man with the “fiery eyes!”
Beautifully done, seamless.
(and the links were fun, too.)

By: Radio Nowhere

Radio Nowhere — Thu, 11 Jun 2009 12:53:43 +0000

If there can be only one, this one is certainly it.

well done! So very well done.

By: gautami tripathy

gautami tripathy — Thu, 11 Jun 2009 12:48:46 +0000

A complete novel in here! dance baby, dance

By: Paul Oakley

Paul Oakley — Mon, 08 Jun 2009 21:57:56 +0000

I was always fond of the Highlander movies and series. This adaptation of the concept certainly sucked me into its vortex.

a white veil hides her
Egyptian eyes and
obsidian waterfall hair

but he sees through
her womanly curtain
and softly calls her name

Wonderful!