This week’s Read Write Poem Prompt suggested that we pick a vowel sound and use it through out the poem, but this week, my Muse decided he wanted to play around with alliteration and assonance instead — so I listened, and the result is this poem.
Also, I’ve been reading Galway Kinnell’s The Book of Nightmares and have been inspired to use nightmares as a theme this week — this is my third poem about nightmares. I hope you enjoy the read.
-Nicole
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Many nights I have spent, my back bent and busted
from hoof prints imprinting themselves, galloping
out of the gold-edged leaves of Bible paper. I
started life
as an exclamation point,
but in the dark, I curl
into a fetal comma,
unable to suspend their apocalyptic sentences
long enough to sleep – or I become a
question mark, adumbrating my tomorrow
eyes rolled skyward to
scan and pan for the presence of
black helicopters. You know the kind:
mosquito-faced, nameless whirlybirds
swirling wind with their wings
and promising prison bars
and beast-marked hands
with their breaths. Beneath their buzz,
I strain to hear
the pre-death ghost boots of troops
slapping the asphalt
in a synchronized Morse Code goosestep applause.
Even my sleep is not sacred: some nights
in this Jungian pit
a row of nuclear cotton flowers bloom, opening
white cloud faces in quick succession –
flash, flash, flash –
and my atomic bones weep skin
in an acid inferno. Now
I’ve been told
that God will separate the sheep from the goats –
but some days,
I silently pass a palm over my hair
and feel for horns, then curve down
to my chin
to check for a beard.
Written 8/11/09
© 2009 Nicole Nicholson. All Rights Reserved.

I really like alliteration!
your yellow shirt contrasts with the pillar
ohhhh… the love for punctuation shows her face! What a joyful read. Thank you!
Nice ending Nicole.
well done….I counted ummmmm 86 vowels there
Great piece Nicole. There is a lot mixed into this poem much left to the interpretation of the reader and that is a good thing. I enjoyed reading it and find that it may be one of the best poems you have written.
Regards,
DH
This is really really good. You’re doing all kinds of things with sound here — and the poem advances image to image with a wonderful pace.
This was a great ride nicole – frustrating and threatening to a degree… but wonderful… I enjoyed all the imagery, and I especially liked the images of the body forming punctuation marks in bed… well written!
…rob