I attempted to mash up two of my poems for Read Write Poem Prompt #95: The Poetics of the Mashup…but I didn’t find two poems that I liked well enough to mash up together. So I chose to revise a poem that I was less than happy with.
I wrote a poem, “Athena”, back during National Poetry Month, meaning it to be a response to Patricia Smith’s poem “Medusa”. I ended up with a very vitriolic original draft, giving vent to Athena’s rage and jealousy. But then I came across this write-up about Medusa’s true origins — and it made me think, and inspired me to rewrite the poem, which appears below. Enjoy.
-Nicole
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This is you and me, divided
by a dichotomy. Mortals have tried
to solve our equation for centuries, using us
as the variables – but x never equals anything
that spoke of combining black and white and then
dividing by two. In the end, they forgot
that we were supposed to be added
together.
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