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		<title>If You Want A Boxer</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[This was written off of the lyric and verse challenge prompt on Poets Who Blog Interactive. The prompt was to write a poem with the first line being any lyric in the Leonard Cohen song, &#8220;I&#8217;m Your Man&#8221;. WARNING: this one is quite bitter and caustic. If you&#8217;re not in the mood for this, come [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=ravenswingpoetry.com&amp;blog=3029221&amp;post=149&amp;subd=ravenswingpoetry&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><em>This was written off of the <a href="http://poetswhoblog.wordpress.com/2008/05/03/lyrics-and-verse-challenge/">lyric and verse challenge</a> prompt on Poets Who Blog Interactive. The prompt was to write a poem with the first line being any lyric in the Leonard Cohen song, <a href="http://www.lyricsfreak.com/l/leonard+cohen/im+your+man_20082812.html">&#8220;I&#8217;m Your Man&#8221;.</a> WARNING: this one is quite bitter and caustic. If you&#8217;re not in the mood for this, come back and read another day.</p>
<p>-Nicole</em><span id="more-149"></span></p>
<p>If you want a boxer, then why don’t you<br />
go punch someone else? My skin is not<br />
a leather casing which contains a few<br />
million grains of sand inside! You forgot</p>
<p>that I stand before you as a human,<br />
bruised, battered, sore from all the times you got<br />
angry and I was the first one to stand<br />
in your way. Don’t give me that bloody rot</p>
<p>about how I supposedly made you<br />
lose your religion: believe me, I’ve got<br />
your number now, and I now know that you<br />
have no self-control. I’ve taken a lot</p>
<p>of abuse from you, but no more. Time’s up.<br />
I’m not listening anymore, so shut up.</p>
<p><strong>Written 6/12/08</strong><br />
&copy; 2008 Nicole Nicholson. All Rights Reserved.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[This is a poem written off of another prompt on Scott Woods&#8217; journal. Today&#8217;s prompt: write a poem that is a letter to an old teacher. Enjoy. -Nicole Dear Mr. Kinney: thank you for giving me Excalibur – the knowledge of great words and how to use them. You showed the living soul of advanced [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=ravenswingpoetry.com&amp;blog=3029221&amp;post=143&amp;subd=ravenswingpoetry&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><em>This is a poem written off of another prompt on <a href="http://scottwoods.livejournal.com/">Scott Woods&#8217; journal</a>. Today&#8217;s prompt: <a href="http://scottwoods.livejournal.com/245736.html">write a poem that is a letter to an old teacher</a>. Enjoy.</p>
<p>-Nicole</em></p>
<p>Dear Mr. Kinney: thank you for giving<br />
me Excalibur – the knowledge of great words<br />
and how to use them. You showed the living<br />
soul of advanced vocabulary heard<span id="more-143"></span></p>
<p>never before by sixth grade ears: words such<br />
as “potentate”. You called them “college words”<br />
and gave a weekly list to study, much<br />
to the chagrin of some – but I loved words</p>
<p>with power and meaning. They were weapons<br />
of mass creation, language swords which spurred<br />
me to arrange them in poetic configurations<br />
and proper prose. So what if I’m a nerd:</p>
<p>For I wield a vocabulary sword.<br />
Thank you, teacher, for an ageless reward.</p>
<p><strong>Written 6/10/08</strong><br />
&copy; 2008 Nicole Nicholson. All Rights Reserved.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[An ancient Egyptian figurine of a cat in the Louvre museum. Courtesy of Wikipedia. This was a prompt poem written in response to One Simple Impression&#8217;s prompt this week on pets. Instead of a haiku, though, I ended up with a triple sonnet using the rhyme scheme I accidentally invented yesterday (yes, I am going [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=ravenswingpoetry.com&amp;blog=3029221&amp;post=142&amp;subd=ravenswingpoetry&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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<p><em>This was a prompt poem written in response to <a href="http://onesingleimpression.blogspot.com/2008/06/prompt-15-pets.html">One Simple Impression&#8217;s prompt this week on pets</a>. Instead of a haiku, though, I ended up with a triple sonnet using the rhyme scheme I accidentally invented yesterday (yes, I am going to call it a <a href="http://ravenswingpoetry.com/category/poems/sonnet/nicholsonian-sonnet/">Nicholsonian sonnet</a> &#8211; it&#8217;s a takeoff of the Spenserian sonnet form). So here it is. Enjoy.</p>
<p>-Nicole</em></p>
<p>Long ago in Nippon, I, sitting, waved<br />
a sword at a landlord of great wealth<br />
and caused him to approach me; thus I saved<br />
him from a lightning strike. The man himself<span id="more-142"></span></p>
<p>thanked me and christened me Maneki Neko.<br />
In Nordic lands, I enjoyed a fine health<br />
of being sacred to Freyja; for lo,<br />
in service to the love goddess herself,</p>
<p>I pulled her chariot, it is said. I<br />
have carried lovingly the spirit self<br />
of each Siamese king upon death. My<br />
purpose: to ensure that the king himself</p>
<p>would be present to see the coronation<br />
of his son ere he traveled to Heaven.</p>
<p>I also walked with pharaohs, head erect,<br />
a walking image of Bastet herself,<br />
nose held high in the hot air of Kemet.<br />
I wore ornaments of gold, not by pelf,</p>
<p>but as grateful gifts from my admirers.<br />
I ate the finest cuisine that their wealth<br />
could buy. Now, I imagine that inquirers<br />
wonder what happened. I’ll tell you myself.</p>
<p>You see, I cannot be easily tamed,<br />
though you perceived me as just like yourselves,<br />
domestic. I aloof, unreachable, became<br />
wicked, the symbol of witches and devils</p>
<p>because you could not teach me. So then you<br />
christened upon me dark legends anew.</p>
<p>First, you called me the witch’s familiar<br />
and burned my cat kindred en masse. Your health<br />
you naively destroyed; a peculiar<br />
effect which you all wrought upon yourselves</p>
<p>was the Black plague, for we cats killed the rats<br />
that carried it. You knew not what dark health<br />
you called upon your cities. Then, we cats<br />
suffered again, accused of the ill health</p>
<p>of your babies and children. Supposedly<br />
we stole the breath from their lips, and a wealth<br />
of doubt, fear, and lies were enough to cruelly<br />
condemn us as thieves of juvenile health.</p>
<p>You’ve left off all that madness; now a pet<br />
I am, but my history I’ll never forget.</p>
<p><strong>Written 6/10/08</strong><br />
&copy;2008 Nicole Nicholson. All Rights Reserved.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[My Father This poem was written for Scott Wood&#8217;s LiveJournal writing prompt (&#8220;Write a poem inserting the phrase: &#8216;I love you, but I can&#8217;t see you right now&#8217;&#8221;). The subject matter was partially inspired by the prompt on Simply Snickers, but the poem specifically for that prompt needs to be written still. This was written [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=ravenswingpoetry.com&amp;blog=3029221&amp;post=138&amp;subd=ravenswingpoetry&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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<p><em>This poem was written for <a href="http://scottwoods.livejournal.com/245065.html">Scott Wood&#8217;s LiveJournal writing prompt (&#8220;Write a poem inserting the phrase: &#8216;I love you, but I can&#8217;t see you right now&#8217;&#8221;)</a>. The subject matter was partially inspired by the prompt on <a href="http://simplysnickers.blogspot.com/2008/06/poetry-prompt-for-sunday-june-15-2008.html">Simply Snickers</a>, but the poem specifically for that prompt needs to be written still. </p>
<p>This was written as a modified Spenserian sonnet &#8211; in short, I misremembered the rhyme scheme, which is [abab bcbc cdcd ee] and wrote it with a rhyme scheme of [abab cbcb dbdb dd]. So perhaps I have created a <a href="http://ravenswingpoetry.com/category/poems/sonnet/nicholsonian-sonnet/">Nicholsonian sonnet</a>? <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  It remains to be seen.</p>
<p>Anyway, enjoy.</p>
<p>-Nicole</em><br />
&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;-<br />
I love you, but I can&#8217;t see you right now.<br />
You are an enigma from beyond the grave;<br />
the facts of your life you never allowed<br />
yourself to reveal. In order to save<span id="more-138"></span></p>
<p>your image and essence in my mental<br />
hard drive, I stare at your photographs. They’ve<br />
given me, though, no clue to your parental<br />
absence. I have nothing else of you, save</p>
<p>those pictures, your legal paper trail, and<br />
Mom’s and my memories; I am a slave<br />
to stories passed to me like second-hand<br />
clothing which I still sort through. I forgave</p>
<p>you, but I still need to know – who am I?<br />
Decoding you is where my answers lie.</p>
<p><strong>Written 6/9/08</strong><br />
&copy; Nicole Nicholson. All Rights Reserved.</p>
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