While Waiting For A Bus

Torn Notebook, 1 by Flowrbx
Torn Notebook, 1 by Flowrbx

This tanka was written for two prompts – Monday Mural at Poefusion (which uses the above picture) and One Single Impression Prompt #32: Serendipity. Enjoy.

-Nicole
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torn pages in the wind
a white bird lands in my palm
singing silent songs
in ink; I wanted a ride
instead, I found someone’s soul

Written 10/5/08
© 2008 Nicole Nicholson. All Rights Reserved.

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About ravenswingpoetry

I am a 38 year old writer from Columbus, OH and the creator of Raven's Wing Poetry. I am a poet, seeker, fellow traveler, and autistic.
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16 Responses to While Waiting For A Bus

  1. Delicate and beautiful!

  2. What a wonderful discovery! Serendipity indeed.

  3. Scot says:

    great poem–loved it

  4. SandyCarlsqn says:

    I like that very much. What a beautiful transformation!

  5. Sandy says:

    Perfect! I love the last two lines.

  6. Pam says:

    Very nice. I’m impressed that you were able to use both of the prompts.

  7. Raven, I love this poem. It’s beautiful and reaches out for a brief moment allowing you to find yourself. Enjoyed this immensely. Well done. Have a nice day.

  8. susan says:

    “I wanted a ride”

    I like what this implies.

  9. What a nice surprise! You, yourself, must be open to receive such a gift!

  10. patois says:

    Your sentiments are so wonderfully put. What a great poem!

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